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God, Give Me Wings by ~PunkDancer:iconPunkDancer:





"Hey, do you ever wonder what it would be like to fly?", the young girl asked her companion as they sat on roof of her two story house. "Sometimes. Why?" replied the young man. "I've just been thinking and wondering. I need to just find a way to just, like, get away from all the troubles and stuff. And I just feel like flying. Ya know?" "Well, I have an idea." The young boy pulled her into a kiss. As he kissed her, he entwined his fingers with her's, his other hand instantly finding it's place behind her neck. When they broke the kiss, the girl had a look of love in her jade eyes, and both seemed to understand what they had to do. Holding hands, they kissed again, shorter this time. They looked toward the setting sun and jumped, descending toward the ground. In that instant as their minds began to black out, both had flew, and achieved their dream to fly, and were to be together forever.
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Well, my first try at a story. It's also based on a dream i had awhile ago. Don't laugh at it, i know it's corny. But, i'd like some helpful comments, plz. And the title, i have no clue were it came from.
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iteresting...

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BOOM BIOTCH! I SWANTON UR SRRY *SS!
Dumb Ass Questions Deserve Smart Ass Answers. XD
its very..um..odd. i just kinda typed what my mind was feeling, which was all jumbled and stuff.

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I like yu-gi-oh, death note, yaoi, manga, music, vampires, and wrestling, deal with it!

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